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假如你的英国笔友Peter来信说寒假要来中国旅游,希望你能回信给一些吃喝玩乐以及游览名胜古迹的攻略.
DearPeter:
I’mverygladthatyouwillcometoChinainthewinterholiday,andit’smyhonortotellyousomewheregoodtovisitinourcountry.
Beijinghasmanyhistoricspotsandinterestplaces.Haveyoueverheardof“hewhodoesn'treachtheGreatWallisnotatrueman”?Ithinkyoumayhave.So,IsuggestthatyoucangoandvisittheGreatWall.WhenyouclimbontheGreatWall,youwillfindthatitislikeadragon,andyoucanfeastyoureyesonthebeautifulscene.You’dbetterbringsomefoodandwater,becausethelongwalkmaymakeyoutired.Whenyou’rehungry,youcangotothenearestrestaurant.
Intheafternoon,youcanvisittheTian'anmenSquare.Intheotherdays,youcangotootherfamousplace,suchastheImperialPalace.
Yours,
William
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