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【帮我修改英语日记YesterdayIwastiredbeacusIdidallofhousework.Somyhomelookedclean.Whenmymomcomedbackhomeandnoticedit,itmadeherhappy.Somymomkissedmeandmadedliciousmeal.Whenmymompraisedme,Ialsofelthappy.Tho】
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YesterdayIwastiredbeacusIdidallofhousework.Somyhomelookedclean.Whenmymomcomedbackhomeandnoticedit,itmadeherhappy.Somymomkissedmeandmadedliciousmeal.Whenmymompraisedme,Ialsofelthappy.ThoughIdevotedtearandhard,Istillfelthappy.IfIdidn'tdoit,today'slifewillbeboring!Why?Beausethelifeliesinexercise,andhappinessliesingiving.

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  语言欠简洁,意思欠连贯   YesterdayIwastiredafterIfinisheddongallmyhousework.Myhomelookedclean.Whenmymomcamebackhomeandnoticedthis,shefeltveryhappyandkissedme.Shemadedliciousmealformeaswell.Whenshepraisedme,Ialsofelthappy.ThoughIdevotedtearsandhardwork,Istillfelthappy.IfIdidn'tdothat,mylifewillbeboring,forourlifeneedsexercise,andhappinesscomesfromgiving.
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