帮助修改下小演讲稿的内容
IarrivedatAdelaideforeightdaysandthisismyfifthlesson.however,itisabigchangetoviewofEnglishformeinthisshorttimebeforeIhavegonetohere.BecauseIfindafactthatifyouaregoodatEnglish,youcangetajobwithwell-payeasier,comparetootherpeopleinChina.However,whenyoucometoAustralia,everythingischanged.Englishisnotadvancedskillforyoubutasobasalskillforlivingandstudying.SoIwillbenotspendmoretimeondoingsomethingelse,butlearnEnglishfirstandwithotherskills.Inthatcase,Ilearnsomethingwillfasterandbetter!
告诉下哪写的不好哪里可以换种方式表达.
那第一句应该是Ihavearrivedatadelaide
我不想让人翻译,我是语法盲人!
我要说的就是我未来的学习目标!
用这个文章吧!
IhavearrivedatAdelaideforeightdaysandthisismyfifthlesson.however,itisabigchangetoviewofEnglishformeinthisshorttimebeforeIhavegonetohere.BecauseIfindafactthatifyouaregoodatEnglish,youcangetajobwithwell-payeasily,comparetootherpeopleinChina.However,whenyoucometoAustraliawheretheofficiallangueisEnglish,everythingischanged.Englishisnotadvancedskillforyoubutasobasalskillforlivingandstudying.Consequently,Iwillbenotspendmoretimeondoingsomethingelse,butlearnEnglishfirstandwithotherskills.Inthatcase,Idobelievethatlearneverythingwillfasterandbetter!
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