YeGongHaoLong
Onceaponatime,intheChucontrytherewasamancalledYeGong,helikesdragonsverymuch.Hisclothesembroideddragons,hispillercarveddragons,hiscupsandbowlsallhavedrangonspaternsandhisdecorationshasdragonspaternstoo,eventhewallsofhishomealsopaintedagreatbigdragon.Thisnewsmovedthedragonintheheaven,sothedragongoestoYeGong’shousetomeethim.ButwhenYeGongseestherealdragonhewasscaredbythedragon,hesays:goawayyoumonster!”Thedragonaskshim:didn’tyousayyoulikedragonsverymuch?”YeGongsays:Ionlylikethefakedragon!”Thenheranaway.Thisfabletellsusthataveryvividmetaphor,bittersatireoftheformulaleavesthecharacters,theyonlyexposedthedeepsounding,andignoringtheactualbadidea,badstyle.Throughthisstory,wemustdiscardthetheorydivorcedfromreality,badideas,,badstyle,andestablisharealisticgoodidea,
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